Persuasive Writing Self Evaluation

Surface Features- Great
Because there is no spelling or punctuation mistakes

Deeper Features- Good
Because my ideas are great and my sentances make sense. There is a couple of ideas in a parahgraph

Title & Intro- Good
The title describes the purpose of the writing.
The introduction has a hook that captures the audiences attention and makes them want to carry on reading

Organisation of the writing- Good
The hook captures the audiences attention so the reader reads on. The arguments are strong but could be stronger. The summary is good and it wraps the writing up.

Strength of Argument- Good
I am only writing about the topic. Most of the facts are true

Publication- Great
Because I have photos and a title that stands out from the writing

Speech Feedback Term 3 - Why Chicago is a Good City to Visit

2.50 Striking introduction, which grabbed the audience attention. You gave lots of eye contact and used cue cards. Varied voice. You talked about different aspects of Chicago in a logical order and gave interesting examples.        
 
Next Steps:
Perhaps consider the sort of information that would be more interesting to your audience, in this case 9 and 10-year olds. I wonder if your content was more suited to adults visiting Chicago? Good speech, well done.