Next Steps:
Perhaps consider the sort of information that would be more interesting to your audience, in this case 9 and 10-year olds. I wonder if your content was more suited to adults visiting Chicago? Good speech, well done.
Monday, September 10, 2007
Speech Feedback Term 3 - Why Chicago is a Good City to Visit
2.50 Striking introduction, which grabbed the audience attention. You gave lots of eye contact and used cue cards. Varied voice. You talked about different aspects of Chicago in a logical order and gave interesting examples.
Next Steps:
Perhaps consider the sort of information that would be more interesting to your audience, in this case 9 and 10-year olds. I wonder if your content was more suited to adults visiting Chicago? Good speech, well done.
Next Steps:
Perhaps consider the sort of information that would be more interesting to your audience, in this case 9 and 10-year olds. I wonder if your content was more suited to adults visiting Chicago? Good speech, well done.
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