Elise's Reflection on 2007

Year Reflection

Plus
This year I have learnt lots about Blogger, Google Docs and how to use Skype
I have made lots of new friends that are going to Cobham
I have reached most of my goals(Active Listening ect. )
I have won lots of sporting events like 1200metres and Triathlon
Minus
Some of my friends have been excluding me.
Mr. Clarke and Mrs. Howison got some grumpy relievers!

Persuasive Writing Self Evaluation

Surface Features- Great
Because there is no spelling or punctuation mistakes

Deeper Features- Good
Because my ideas are great and my sentances make sense. There is a couple of ideas in a parahgraph

Title & Intro- Good
The title describes the purpose of the writing.
The introduction has a hook that captures the audiences attention and makes them want to carry on reading

Organisation of the writing- Good
The hook captures the audiences attention so the reader reads on. The arguments are strong but could be stronger. The summary is good and it wraps the writing up.

Strength of Argument- Good
I am only writing about the topic. Most of the facts are true

Publication- Great
Because I have photos and a title that stands out from the writing